OUGD505 - Design Production 2: Studio Brief 2 - Logo Feedback

I asked people for feedback on the logos at this stage to see what they thought so I could develop a couple further as I had quite a lot now. I'm not entirely happy with any of them, but I have to stop at some point and if other people like one of them I could go with that as I am going to be my harshest critic.

Dan

He said these two logos look more like a leisure centre, which I agree with due to the wave looking like a swimming pool.

But he said he liked this one because of the sunset and wave, looks more like a holiday.

Kirsty

She said she liked this one and the colours that have been used.

She also said I could go with the typographic one if I didn't like the waves.

Sam H
He said that he liked the typographic ones as well.

Sam C
He said he liked the one with the water sprouting at the top because of the colour, but also said that the typographical one was quite simple and would work on a range of stuff.

He agreed that this looked quite dated.

J'nae
She said that these are the two that stood out most to her.

I feel a bit better now after asking for feedback, because people liked a variety of different ones so they probably aren't all as bad as I think.

I think I will bear these three in mind and work on the rest of the identity in the meantime and see which one fits in best.